This is a reminder that the final exam will be in Quigley room 203 at 10:10am on Monday. Please arrive with pen and paper, as well as a copy of your Mercury Reader.
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We will not be meeting today due to the University’s closure. Therefore I am asking that you email your portfolio to me, and if that is not possible bring it with you to the final exam. If you email the portfolio I will have your estimated final grade (minus the 10% from your exam) calculated and ready for you on Monday and your portfolio grade will be posted to D2L before that. Also if you email the portfolio do not worry about scanning your original drafts–simply bring them with you to the exam and I will confirm the points I credited you for them.
Everyone be safe and enjoy the snowy weekend!
THE FINAL PORTFOLIO IS DUE THIS FRIDAY.
Your portfolio must be bound in some way: brackets, binder, or folder. It must also be submitted to D2L to earn credit.
The portfolio should contain:
1. Your reflective introduction
2. A revised Unit Two essay
3. Two additional revised essays of your choice
4. Your original Unit essays
ENG 101: English Composition I
Unit Five Assignment Prompt:
Reflective Introduction & Portfolio
Portfolio Submission Date: Friday, 06 December 2013
To demonstrate your growth as a writer, your understanding of your composing processes, and your awareness of your rhetorical choices, you will compose a Portfolio of three revised and polished essays. This Portfolio will include Unit Two, along with two of the following: Unit One, Unit Three, and Unit Four.
To introduce your reader to your Portfolio—and to your semester-long development as a writer and scholar—you will compose a Reflective Introduction, which will discuss:
I. the three essays you selected, with attention to rhetorical choices you made about:
i. your initial composition of the essays
ii. your revisions of these essays (both from Rough Draft to Working Folder Draft and from WF Draft to Portfolio Draft)
iii. your reasons for including these essays
II. your development as a writer in this course, with thorough reflection upon:
i. increased skills as a writer and scholar
ii. areas to be targeted for improvement in future courses
iii. how development will serve you in future situations
Thus, in the Reflective Introduction, you will write about your own writing; and, in this process, you will show that you can “take a careful look at [your] own work to identify [your] patterns, strengths, and preferences for negotiating writing tasks, for learning new skills, and for putting those skills into practice” (Portfolio Keeping 6).
The Reflective Introduction builds upon previous writings. In Unit One, you explored an event in your life that increased your literacy education and enabled you to join a community. Here, you will explore your semester in ENG 101, an event that increased your rhetorical education and enabled you to join the community of academia. In Units Two and Three, you analyzed and evaluated the rhetorical choices of others; in this Unit, you will analyze and evaluate your own choices, writing processes, and their results. In Unit Four, you synthesized knowledge from multiple texts to assert your own claim; here, you will synthesize evidence from our entire course (i.e. essays, flashwrites, homework, readings, discussion, etc.) to support your conclusions about your evolution as a writer. Further, the Reflections completed after each Unit serves as a Unit-length example of this course-length Reflective Introduction.
Reflective Introduction Requirements
Page Length: 5-6 double-spaced pages (12-point font, 1” margins) with MLA header
The Reflective Introduction should:
- show critical engagement with and reflection upon your own writing processes
- demonstrate your ability to use college-level written communication
- have a creative, unique title and introduction that captures reader interest
- present a thesis that offers an overall evaluation your writing and development
- illustrate your writing journey through an overarching metaphor or image
- provide sufficient evidence from a variety of sources to support your claims
these sources (i.e. readings, drafts, responses) must be cited accurately
- have a logical organization aided by effective transitions
- be virtually free of mechanical, grammatical, and usage errors
The Portfolio should:
- open with a Reflective Introduction
- hold three revised and polished essays
- must hold Unit Two
- hold two of the following: Unit One, Unit Three, & Unit Four
- include WF Drafts and Professor Responses for each included essay
- place in an order that supports ideas explored in Reflective Intro
Revision Policy for Portfolio:
Because our course supports the theory that writing is a process occurring over time, and continual improvement is possible for all writers, the English Department strongly encourages all writers to revise the essays selected for their Portfolio.
Since our course also supports and encourages risk-taking, creativity, and invention throughout the composition process, please be advised that you will not receive a lower grade on your Portfolio Draft than you did on your WF Draft. If you choose not to revise, you will receive the same grade. If you revise in a way that some might see the essay as less successful after revisions, you will receive the same grade. Strong, thoughtful revisions, though, can only increase your grade—so, revision is encouraged!
Portfolio Due Date: Friday, 06 December 2013
*submit (1) hard copy in class AND (2) electronic copy via D2L
*if not submitted both in hard & electronic copy, late penalty will occur
Synthesis Essay Scorecard
for each question, rate yourself 0 (no), 1 (somewhat), 2 (pretty good), or 3 (excellent)
also, highlight/circle/mark the THREE questions you wish to discuss in detail during conference
- An introduction? __________
- Begin with an attention-getter? ___________
- Introduce your topic & gives context? __________
- Ends with a thesis that is based on synthesis? ______
- A summary section? __________
- Objective summary for all five sources? __________
- All summaries 2-4 sentences long? __________
- First sentence of each: title, author, ethos & their thesis? ________
- Remaining 1-3 sentences develop relevant points? __________
- An analysis section? __________
- Discuss the main ideas shared by all 5 sources? __________
- Explores the sources’ similarities & differences? __________
- Uses quotes during comparison to illustrate?___________
- A synthesis section? __________
- Explore your past feelings/thoughts on topic? __________
- Expands on your thesis by addressing a possible solution to your issue that you derived from your sources? __________
- Explore what you now feel? __________
- Throughout, are you & articles having a conversation? __________
- A conclusion? __________
- Begin by restating your thesis? __________
- Connect your essay / its topic to your reader? __________
- End with a vivid scene/question/statement? __________
Sources & Citations:
- 5+ strong, relevant sources? __________
- 3+ sources from MR and 2+ from outside works? __________
- Use 1+ quote(s) from each source? __________
- Give in-text citations for every quote? __________
- When sharing another’s views, signal phrases? __________
- A unique, creative title? __________
- MLA headers on top-left (1st page) and top-right (all)? __________
- 12-point font, 1” margins, and double-spaced? __________
- Clear, smooth transitions and almost no surface errors? __________
We have conferences scheduled for Friday (11/15) and Monday (11/18) in Faner 2238. You must come to your scheduled conference or you will receive two unexcused absences. If you did not hand a rough draft in to me today you will need to bring what you do have completed of your Unit Four essay to the conference. Also, try to have the check list that I have emailed to you completed and with you for our conference.
It’s time to get things done, so do not waste the two days that we are not meeting as a class. Get work done on your essay–schedule a meeting with the writing center, ask a friend to have a look at your paper–and keep working even if we are not set to meet until Monday. If you end up changing your draft bring in a new copy and we can go over that as well.
The final draft is due Wednesday, November 20th.
How do I tie my articles together and have it all make sense? How do I unite my body paragraphs?
In order to tie your essays together you need to first find the one common topic that they all share. From there begin listing subtopics that appear in each article. You will find that some articles have similar or the same subtopics. This is a good way to go about forming body paragraphs. If you devote a paragraph to each subtopic, then compare and contrast two of your sources’ viewpoints in that paragraph, you will have united your sources and kept within the overall topic of your thesis.
An example would be that I may find that all five of my essays have something to say about coastal erosion, but they comment on this topic in different ways and at varying degrees. So then I make a list of the types of things, or subtopics, that my articles say about coastal erosion.
Article #1: cost of erosion for the country, how coastal erosion is a serious threat to communities during hurricane season.
Article #2: coastal erosion is a natural occurrence and people should simply adapt by not living near the coast, the politics of coastal erosion.
Article #3: coastal erosion is wiping out an entire fishing industry in America.
Article #4: facts and figures about coastal erosion over the last sixty years.
Article #5: what is being done to combat coastal erosion in other countries and how America could follow suit.
After making my list of subtopics I can see many ways that my articles are in conversation or synthesis. First of all article #2 is my opposing viewpoint and goes against the grain of my other articles so it can be used to show the rebuttal to my thesis. Second, article #1 and article #3 are both discussing money—for article #1 it is the general cost of erosion for the country, and for #3 it is specifically the loss we take when an entire industry is under threat. Articles 4 and 5 can both be used to reinforce my other articles and to provide context for my reader.
What if I still haven’t found any good outside sources?
It is very important that you do this sooner rather than later. If research is proving to be difficult for you then you may want to stick to Opposing Viewpoints and stay away from Academic Search Premier. Finding your sources takes effort, it will not happen in ten minutes—unless you are very lucky or willing to settle for a weak source. Take the time to look through articles based on your overall topic and the subtopics of the essays that you chose from your Mercury Reader. Ask a librarian or make an appointment with the Writing Center of all else fails.
How specific does my overall topic have to be?
Your overall topic is most likely going to be broad or very general. What you need to focus on making specific is your thesis. Your thesis should be developed from the synthesis of all of your articles. This implies that you have identified the subtopics of those articles, which are more specific aspects of your broad overall topic. So when determining your overall topic you do not have to stress about making all five sources agree on a very specific point, save that work for your thesis and how you plan to address the subtopics in each source.
How is synthesis different from analysis?
In order to get to synthesis you must analyze. When you analyze your sources you are breaking them down to observe how they work topic by topic. For our Unit Four essay this is done through comparing and contrasting sources. When you only focus on a single topic of a source at a time you are giving it close attention, thus analyzing not just what the source is arguing, but how it is making its point. The reason comparing and contrasting is used to do this is because when we place sources beside one another it is easier to observe the smaller, more specific details.
Once you have analyzed all five sources by comparing and contrasting them via subtopics, you can begin to synthesize all of that information. In synthesis you take the best ideas from all of your sources and try to make a better, relevant “answer” or claim to the problem at hand. So if you are writing about pesticides then you would read and analyze what all five of your sources have to say about that and from there choose the best approach to dealing with pesticides based on what all of the sources had to offer.