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In class assignment due Friday

Revise these passages from abstract language to concrete language by adding specificity and information that is sensory driven:

1. My summer trip became quite interesting near the end.

2. Her dessert was a perfect end to a wonderful dinner.

3. I love my favorite band and all of their crazy songs.

4. That bathroom was disgusting.

5. This movie was so sad, I never thought a story about football could upset me that way.

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